User blog:ToaCman/My Story

I want to write a story about my MOC's, and there is one part that I would like recommadation for.

When the Toa migrate to Spherus Magna, some of them viewed killing enemies as a justified way to bring peace, so they branched out and became new warriors called Neo Toa. They still follow other rules of the Toa, but altered to fit their fighting style.

Let me know if this needs any work, thanks. :) ToaCman 04:50, February 7, 2011 (UTC)