User blog comment:Matau62/Story chapter donations/@comment-2120224-20100811072217


 * sigh*... I shall submit a chapter suggestion is no-one else will...So here goes.

Lewa was still falling to his death. The space between him and the ground were closing in. He could see the mass of pointed rocks just behind him. He started to commence his plan. He activated his Miru for a split second, and he quickly turned his body and clung onto a ragged rock. The rest of them were inches away from completely piercing him. "here goes..." he thought. As the tunnel ended, he found himself in a huge cavern. "now!!" Lewa thought loudly, the thought almost ending up out of his mouth. He threw himself off the rock with all his strength, and the huge mass just missed him by inches. The rock exploded as it hit the ground, sending chunks of jagged rocks flying in every direction. Lewa plummeted onto the floor. "ughhhhh..." He murmured, just before he passed out. He woke up to an agonizing, rumbling shout of pain. Lewa sprang to his feet. He just remembered his search for Kongu. He saw a pointy piece of rock just beside him. "hmmm..." he wondered. "maybe I'll need this..." He clutched it tightly in his clawed hand. He hurried into a tunnel where the shout came from. His worries grew as he ran through the tunnel. He could hear a little rattle, like one from a scorpion, only much more ferocious. He readied his weapon. He wanted to keep his axe for when he was desperate. He could see the end of the tunnel. He rushed through, and what he saw was truly shocking. To one side was Kongu, leaning over an unconscious Onua. To the other side, he saw an enormous Nui-Jaga. Keeping silent, he tiptoed towards it. It's back was facing him, so he had an advantage of a sneak attack. As soon as he got close enough, he leaped over the Nui-Jaga, and prepared his weapon to stab it. But this Rahi was no ordinary one. It sensed him immediately, and lashed out with it's stinger, injecting it's venom into Lewa. "ARRRRRRRGH!!" He screamed as he hit the far wall. His scream woke up Onua, and he sprang to his feet. He glanced at the damage the Nui-Jaga caused on Lewa. His anger bubbled up inside him like an earthquake. "HOW DARE YOU!!!" He shouted in a fearsome, low voice. He charged towards the Rahi, and summoned his Miru to launch himself high into the air. He quickly summoned his Pakari, and directed all the strength in his body to his fists. He slammed them onto the Rahi, sending it plummeting through the ground. He leaped off it, and landed next to the injured Lewa."Lewa! Lewa! Wake up!" He shouted, shaking Lewa whilst doing so. "I'll get more help. Kongu, you stay here and look after Lewa. If there's trouble, shout for me. I'll be able to hear it through the earth." Onua explained. Kongu nodded, and Onua raced off. Seconds ticked by. Seconds turned into minutes. Minutes turned into hours. Just as Kongu was about to drift off to sleep, he heard something. "grrhhhhh..." Kongu glanced at Lewa. Lewa's eyes flickered. As he regained consciousness, Kongu hugged him." Your awake, Toa of Air!" Kongu exclaimed. Lewa opened his eyes. But this time, something was different. His eyes were full of anger, and were a fire deep red. "AAARRRRRGH!!!" He screamed while he whacked Kongu away. Kongu slammed into the wall. Lewa staggered onto his all-fours. He continued screaming. What Kongu saw was truly gruesome. Lewa's mask pooped of his face. His teeth grew long and sharp. Horns pierced through the top of his head. His arms -now legs- grew sharp talons. A tail tipped with an arrowhead grew. His eyes turned feral. He suddenly stopped screaming. He glanced at Kongu with feral eyes. He let out a humongous, deep roar. He charged at Kongu on his all-fours.

ugh, that's it. Please, everyone submit a chapter.