User blog comment:ToaAuserv/The Tables Have Turned, Chapter 1, Part 1/@comment-890056-20081220002113

Another bully good installment sir. Although I find on this line: I took away your Courage, making myself seem much larger and scarier. By concentrating on being unafraid, you stopped my powers from influencing you. . You could've replaced scarier with fearful, and concentrating on being unafraid could've been calming down. I continue looking forward to reading the rest!