User blog:Mazeka369/Visions of the Great Beings

This is a story from BSCW that I wrote. This story takes place on Bara Magna.

In order to resolve the conflict over which village should have the special metal, Tesara and Tajun have send one of their Glatorian to battle it out in Atero. Tesara sends Gresh a rookie and Tajun sends Kiina a fierce competitor. Kiina wins the battle in which Tajun gets the metal. Because of bone hunters Tajun decides to hire Gelu to protect the metal as it travels to Tajun.

Chapter 1: The Beginning
A cloud of dust formed behind a fast-moving wagon being pulled by a Spikit as it travelled through a wide canyon. On that wagon was Gelu a former Glatorian from the ice tribe Iconox and an Agori from Tesara named Lerix. On the outside was an Agori from Tajun named Mever who was steering the wagon. The wagon had travelled from Tesara and was heading to Tajun with special metals used to make armour. Because of recent bone hunters attacks Tesara hired Gelu to make sure that the important cargo gets to Tajun. But bone hunters were not the only thing to worry about. The wagon was now approaching the end of the canyon, Gelu jumped out of the wagon was hanging onto a handle that was a part of the wagon and was looking ahead of the wagon. Right about now Gelu knew something was going to attack the wagon. But what? Lerix was inside the wagon watching the canisters filled with pieces of metal relaxed as the Bara Magna Sun. Suddenly in front of the wagon Glatorian shaped figures surface from under the sand surface. Gelu was the first to spot the Glatorian shaped beings and knew who they were. "Stop the wagon!" Gelu said to Mever. Mever turned his head to Gelu and said "Why, there’s nothing in front of us." "Don't you see the Vorox!" "What Vor..." Mever turned his head that instant and saw a bunch of Vorox twenty feet ahead of the wagon. "Oh those Vorox!!!" Mever then jerked the wagons sterns causing the Spikit pulling the wagon to stop and raise its front legs and bring them down with force. The fast stop made Lerix fly into a wall on the side of the wagon. Lerix got up and climbed onto the wagon roof. "Could someone tell me why we stopped." Lerix said wondering what in the world was going on. Lerix could see that Gelu and Mever were starring at whatever was in front of them. Lerix looked in front of the wagon and saw Vorox, and a lot of them. "Vorox" Lerix whispered.

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