User blog comment:BobTheDoctor27/Team of heroes story/@comment-1271066-20090810082947

Nicely written! But I don't get it, Mazeka is traveling back from Spherus Magna with the alternate Makuta Teridax, and Matoro is death, or is this some kind of alterative universe? However, you should make your own story (with another island, or something like that, and another Team of heroes), and write it just like this. As far as I know, you and me are the only guys who write like this. Your reads very smooth, because you didn't write down the shouting and battle sounds what makes most stories a mess. It looks way more official. Oh and can you explain the scenario a bit more, how did they get there, why are there so many Visorak? (all the Visorak died on Artidax), how did the Brotherhood find out the location of Arthaka? How did Mazeka became an Toa?