User blog:Mata Nui/Mysteries of Terra Magna

Aterius threw himself to the side. He rose and looked at the creature which had attacked him. The scorpion-like creature was already over him again. He screamed of pain when a claw crushed his right arm, then everything turned black. When Aterius woke up, the sun was already on it's way down. He looked around himself, and saw that he was in the middle of a flat, wide, snow-covered area. As he tried to rise, he felt that his fingers were so cold, he could hardly move them. Then, a thought hit him: Wait, a flat, wide area in these lands? That can only mean one thing; I'm in the middle of a frozen lake. The second after, he heard a low crash, and felt that the ice started cracking. He started running towards what he thought was the shore, but the ice was slippery, and he fell several times. The pain in the already hurt right arm was more than unbearable, and he only hoped that the other would still be on it's place when he reached the shore. After a while, he reached the shore. He had just sat down on a stone to rest, when a Thornax Fruit came against him in high speed. He ducked just in time, but felt how one of the sharp spikes scratched cheek. The moment after, the fruit exploded on a rock only a few meters behind Aterius.

To be continued, I think. Comments and ideas are appreciated. Yes I know, I'm a very bad writer.