Hello, This is Boinic_Warrior. This is my FIRST EVER article. It is not the best, but whatever. Bionic Warrior (talk) 22:10, May 16, 2013 (UTC)Bionic_Warrior
Oops. I just realized I spelled "Bionic" wrong in my name. Bionic Warrior (talk) 22:13, May 16, 2013 (UTC)Bionic_Warrior
- Hey Bionic. Congrats on making your first article. :-) There are two things I'd like to mention, though. First of all, does this page already cover the article's contents? Are they distinct enough to deserve separate articles? Secondly, while the quality of the writing is good, it should be written in a neutral, third-person format. Therefore, phrases like "you'll be lunch", or anything using "you", should be avoided. I'll let the BIONICLE wiki editors take it from here, though. I'm not that active here, to be honest. :P BrickfilmNut (talk) 22:17, May 16, 2013 (UTC)