Where did thid story come from?
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This is full of wrong-spelled words. I'll change it. However, revert it if they should be there.Mata Nui (BP Admin) 14:24, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

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On biosector they have summaries of this story,but now its telling about more story updates and this page doesn't have it.Did a new chapter come out,or what?--Bionicledude 02:19, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

According to the BZPower page, where it was origionally released in English instead of Polish, only chapters 1 and 2 have been released, which would lead us to assume that BS01 has not uploaded the second chapter yet. Perhaps you would like to inform them of the second chapter?
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But only chapter one have been translated to English and posted there.Mata Nui (BP Admin) 12:41, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

is there anyway that all the serials and podcasts and short stories and stuff could be made into a legendary page? Because i dont think that anyone should be able to edit greg farshtey's work or anyones work like the guy that wrote tentacles.

--Dudewaldo4 18:18, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

No, though we could protect the article. However, I don't think that would be very good. First reason is that this is an unofficial translation, and will include grammatical mistakes, misspellings, etc. That only applies to this specific story, though. We could surely protect at least the ended podcasts and serials, then again, there are always mistakes made by those who put the information here. Mata Nui 20:12, November 26, 2009 (UTC)


Thanks

thanks for making edits yoshisland! :D

--Dudewaldo4 02:27, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

is there a part missing?

before somebody changed it, the fourth chapter used to be called part five. I read the story and there seems to be a part missing in between part three and what used to be part five. So maybe that was part five and part four isnt there. Where was this story first posted? or at least where could I find it... --Dudewaldo4 19:17, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

It was released in some European countries, and has been translated into English several times. This is probably the place where you're most likely to find a translation. Mata Nui 19:22, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Where???

Where did this story come from? I didn't see it on Bioniclestory.com... --Invisible Signature (It's invisible!!!) 02:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

It was released in Poland, Germany, and maybe a few more European countries. It wasn't released in English, but was unofficially translated on BZPower. Mata_Nui_Signature1.pngMata_Nui_Signature2.png 11:43, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

did greg write it in polish!? dudewaldo4 11:49, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, he wrote it in English, then it was translated into Polish. Mata_Nui_Signature1.pngMata_Nui_Signature2.png 14:19, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

editing

I realize this is the unofficial translation of the story, but could someone please go through and fix the countless grammatical errors? Xeno the Hedgehog 18:59, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

When I was reading though this I found they spelled as thy, so I corrected it.Keighvin's

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